Saturday, April 24, 2010

Villan-elle - Dog v's Sister Jane

Today in Group we experimented with the Villanelle form - of course adapting and fitting it suit ourselves, and we got some pretty nice results - which we'll be showcasing here over the next couple of weeks, so here's the first:

That dog is on that chair over there,
Sister Jane can't adjust,
It's strange because that chair is usually bare.

Sister Jane goes to the chair,
She feels fit to combust,
That dog is sitting there, its coat full and fair.

Her mouth holds traces of smiles being rare
She is melting, turns to rust
That dog is on that chair over there,
It's strange because that chair is usually bare.

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